I can really hear the improvement made from the first WIP to now
Thank you very much!
The vocals are good, and they go along well with the piano chords
But there needs to be more instruments. Maybe some drums would help, and some strings would be great. A synth could also help add some background stuff which would make your song sound much better depending on how you use it
I checked out some stuff from artist Mimi Page, and I do see some benefits of adding a little something else. I thought "Solo Instrument" limited me to one thing but I'll weave in something else to see what might help the sound. Thank you for your feedback!
Though it does get really repetitive after a while, i enjoyed the melodies
I feel like your song could've been condensed to 2-3 minutes, and that would have made the repetition more bearable
Overall, a solid song for a beginner like me
Some great artwork of a great character. Very well done, and i'm really liking the background. Amazing work :)
Thank you! I'm not so confident with backgrounds so that's good to hear :)
Definitely some interesting art. It's a little dark though, it would be nice if it was slightly brighter (or my laptop display is just too dark)
It's supposed to be like night time because Nevada has no sun in the madness series.
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