The vocals are good, and they go along well with the piano chords
But there needs to be more instruments. Maybe some drums would help, and some strings would be great. A synth could also help add some background stuff which would make your song sound much better depending on how you use it
I checked out some stuff from artist Mimi Page, and I do see some benefits of adding a little something else. I thought "Solo Instrument" limited me to one thing but I'll weave in something else to see what might help the sound. Thank you for your feedback!
Though it does get really repetitive after a while, i enjoyed the melodies
I feel like your song could've been condensed to 2-3 minutes, and that would have made the repetition more bearable
Overall, a solid song for a beginner like me
Very calming, i can just feel the happy vibes from this song
Nothing bad to say about it, i'm looking forward to the full song
Thanks dud :D
The lead piano isn't that great honestly. I'd recommend replacing it with a different piano instrument or a synth. It feels like it has too much low end so you might want to try making it an octave or 2 higher if you decide not to change the instrument. The bass and percussion was done well though, so good job on that. Learning a bit of music theory (if you haven't learned any already) could possibly help you improve the melody of the lead piano and add more variety. Overall, it's an ok song for someone with not much experience. I don't have much experience either, i'm just giving my opinion.
Thanks for the comment! I know the basics of music theory. I took classes in school several years ago and free online class designed specifically for electronic music to refresh.
It's quite nice. Though it could use a lot more variety and some mixing improvements, it's a nice idea.
Thanks, I see what you mean. Will definitely take this into account.
Not bad, though it feels like this melody could do a lot better in a completely different genre, possibly DnB. I can definitely see this benefiting from a few more instruments to make it sound more interesting.
Thanks that was my first song ever I'm just happy to see a rating at all.
Not bad, it feels like there's a little bit too much bass. But still, not bad. Nice work.
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