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I can really hear the improvement made from the first WIP to now
Well done!

Dr-Thallium responds:

Thank you very much!

The vocals are good, and they go along well with the piano chords
But there needs to be more instruments. Maybe some drums would help, and some strings would be great. A synth could also help add some background stuff which would make your song sound much better depending on how you use it

Dr-Thallium responds:

I checked out some stuff from artist Mimi Page, and I do see some benefits of adding a little something else. I thought "Solo Instrument" limited me to one thing but I'll weave in something else to see what might help the sound. Thank you for your feedback!

It's quite nice. Though it could use a lot more variety and some mixing improvements, it's a nice idea.

Pylos responds:

Thanks, I see what you mean. Will definitely take this into account.

Not bad, though it feels like this melody could do a lot better in a completely different genre, possibly DnB. I can definitely see this benefiting from a few more instruments to make it sound more interesting.

SoupMod responds:

Thanks that was my first song ever I'm just happy to see a rating at all.

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