The lead piano isn't that great honestly. I'd recommend replacing it with a different piano instrument or a synth. It feels like it has too much low end so you might want to try making it an octave or 2 higher if you decide not to change the instrument. The bass and percussion was done well though, so good job on that. Learning a bit of music theory (if you haven't learned any already) could possibly help you improve the melody of the lead piano and add more variety. Overall, it's an ok song for someone with not much experience. I don't have much experience either, i'm just giving my opinion.
It's quite nice. Though it could use a lot more variety and some mixing improvements, it's a nice idea.
Thanks, I see what you mean. Will definitely take this into account.
Not bad, though it feels like this melody could do a lot better in a completely different genre, possibly DnB. I can definitely see this benefiting from a few more instruments to make it sound more interesting.
Thanks that was my first song ever I'm just happy to see a rating at all.
Not bad, it feels like there's a little bit too much bass. But still, not bad. Nice work.
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